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Message de here4u posté le 31-08-2026 à 22:57:20 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,
Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...
Certains m'avaient dit être gênés d'exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l'impression - souvent fausse - de les exprimer maladroitement ). Dautre part, vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :
1) Do you have a habit that you'd like to get rid of?
2) Should we yield to temptations, or resist them?
3) Do you have a favourite quotation or proverb?
Répondez à 1 ou 2 questions au choix en mp en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu'à atteindre en tout un maximum d'environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d'abord pendant deux jours, sans donner 'votre solution') puis en vert. Une fois le premier texte 'corrigé' au mieux par d'autres membres, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc !) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...
Cet exercice sera corrigé le samedi 12 septembre 2026 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE. 
Message de here4u posté le 31-08-2026 à 22:57:20 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,
Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...
Certains m'avaient dit être gênés d'exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l'impression - souvent fausse - de les exprimer maladroitement ). Dautre part, vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :
1) Do you have a habit that you'd like to get rid of?
2) Should we yield to temptations, or resist them?
3) Do you have a favourite quotation or proverb?
Répondez à 1 ou 2 questions au choix en mp en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu'à atteindre en tout un maximum d'environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d'abord pendant deux jours, sans donner 'votre solution') puis en vert. Une fois le premier texte 'corrigé' au mieux par d'autres membres, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc !) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation... Cet exercice sera corrigé le samedi 12 septembre 2026 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Réponse : Let's suggest 116/ Taking it easy 62 de here4u, postée le 01-09-2026 à 21:54:51 (S | E)
Hello dears,
An answer already!
Let's Suggest 116: topic 2: Should we yield to temptations or resist them? Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
If we believe Oscar Wilde: " the only way to get ride of a temptation is to yield to it."
On the other hand, in the Catholic religion, there is a prayer that asks God: "Do not submit us to temptation", because being tempted is the door open to all exces, giving in to the devil and doing every capital sins."
Nevertheless, yielding to temptation allows us to seize upon our desires, to free ourself from the tension and obsession that can arise from an unsatisfied temptation.
The way we choose to deal with our impulses is important.
As long as we respect the ethics, that our behavior do not hurt anyone and do not harm others or ourselves, temptation can be a good thing .
We can be tempted by an adventure, a challenge, an exciting risk, breaking taboos. Life would be monotonous and unchanging without temptation to move us forward.
However, in the face of negative, illegal, or criminal desirs, resisting gives us the opportunity to exercise self-control.
Summing up the maint point: Each person has their own free will to take their responsibilities depending on circumstances, weighing up the pros and cons.
for your help!Réponse : Let's suggest 116/ Taking it easy 62 de gerold, postée le 03-09-2026 à 21:43:29 (S | E)
Hello!
Let's Suggest 116: topic 2: Should we yield to temptations or resist them? Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
An interesting text, but a few careless mistakes.
If we believe Oscar Wilde: " the only way to get ride of a temptation is to yield to it."
On the other hand, in the Catholic religion, there is a prayer that asks God: "Do not submit us to temptation", because being tempted is the door open to all exces, giving in to the devil and doing every capital sins."
Nevertheless, yielding to temptation allows us to seize upon our desires, to free ourself from the tension and obsession that can arise from an unsatisfied temptation.
The way we choose to deal with our impulses is important.
As long as we respect the ethics, that our behavior
do not hurt anyone and do not harm others or ourselves, temptation can be a good thing .We can be tempted by an adventure, a challenge, an exciting risk, breaking taboos. Life would be monotonous and unchanging without temptation to move us forward.
However, in the face of negative, illegal, or criminal desirs, resisting gives us the opportunity to exercise self-control.
Summing up the maint point: Each person has their own free will to take their responsibilities depending on circumstances, weighing up the pros and cons.
Réponse : Let's suggest 116/ Taking it easy 62 de magie8, postée le 05-09-2026 à 09:35:04 (S | E)
hello correction Thank you Gerold for your help
An interesting text, but a few careless mistakes.
If we believe Oscar Wilde: " the only way to get (rid of a temptation is to yield to it."
On the other hand, in the Catholic religion, ( a prayer asks God: "Do not submit us to temptation", because being tempted ( opens the door to all (excess/all sorts of abuses, giving in to the devil and doing every capital (sin."
Nevertheless, yielding to temptation allows us to seize upon our desires, to free (ourselves from the tension and obsession that can arise from an unsatisfied temptation.
The way we choose to deal with our impulses is important.
As long as we respect () ethics, (if our behaviour (does not hurt anyone and (does not harm others or ourselves, temptation can be a good thing .
We can be tempted by an adventure, a challenge, an exciting risk, (to break taboos / to go against convention. Life would be monotonous and unchanging without temptation to move us forward.
However, in the face of negative, illegal, or criminal (desires, by resisting we prove our self-control.
Summing up the (main point/ (in conclusion: Each person has their own free will to take their responsibilities depending on circumstances, weighing up the pros and cons.
Réponse : Let's suggest 116/ Taking it easy 62 de here4u, postée le 05-09-2026 à 13:55:20 (S | E)
Hello!
Green required.
Réponse : Let's suggest 116/ Taking it easy 62 de here4u, postée le 05-09-2026 à 14:28:49 (S | E)
Hello dears,
Any other improvements?
my indications. If we believe Oscar Wilde: " the only way to get rid of a temptation is to yield to it."
On the other hand, in the Catholic religion, ( a prayer asks God: "Do not submit us to temptation", because being tempted opens the door to all (excess/all sorts of abuses, giving in to the devil and doing every capital sin."
Nevertheless, yielding to temptation allows us to seize upon our desires, to free (ourselves from the tension and obsession that can arise from an unsatisfied temptation.
The way we choose to deal with our impulses is important.
As long as we respect () ethics, if our behaviour does not hurt anyone and does not harm others or ourselves, temptation can be a good thing .
We can be tempted by an adventure, a challenge, an exciting risk, (to break taboos / to go= pour aller?) against convention. Life would be monotonous and unchanging without temptation to move us forward.
However, in the face of negative, illegal, or criminal (desires, by resisting we prove our self-control.
Summing up the (main point/ (in conclusion: Each person has their* own free will to take their responsibilities depending on circumstances, weighing up the pros and cons.
* Lien internet
De bonnes corrections.
Réponse : Let's suggest 116/ Taking it easy 62 de here4u, postée le 08-09-2026 à 21:48:00 (S | E)
Hello!
No reactions to my indications?
Alright! If you don't post tonight, I'll post ANSWER B tomorrow morning!
Réponse : Let's suggest 116/ Taking it easy 62 de here4u, postée le 09-09-2026 à 10:43:12 (S | E)
Hello!
Are you still here?
ANSWER B: Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
Topic 3) Do you have a favourite quotation or proverb?
One of my favourite proverbs is 'The best is the enemy of the good'. As many other sayings, you have to interprete it very carefully. For example, what is 'good' ? Because of course, this proverb is not an excuse to botch your job! Indeed, you have to strive until you feel you have done your best. It is a matter of perceiving exactly when you have done enough for your work. Maybe you'll have to accept some uncertainty: what is it that your next effort will bring? Because the line may be very thin and subtle between improving and spoiling... I guess a lot of artists have faced this dilemma! Not only artists, by the way... I remember that as I was preparing some lessons, I sometimes felt that, even if I was always very well-meaning, I had to stop before adding to many details, or doing useless digressions. There were different points of view to consider, and improving from one of them might have been a worsening from another one.
for your help!Réponse : Let's suggest 116/ Taking it easy 62 de gerold, postée le 09-09-2026 à 10:59:13 (S | E)
Hello!
Any other improvements? my indications.
If we believe Oscar Wilde: " the only way to get rid of a temptation is to yield to it."
On the other hand, in the Catholic religion, ( a prayer asks God: "Do not submit us to temptation", (the usual sentence is "lead us not into temptation", or more modern "do not lead us ...") because being tempted opens the door to all (excess/all sorts of abuses, giving in to the devil and committing every capital sin."
Nevertheless, yielding to temptation allows us to seize upon our desires, to free (ourselves from the tension and obsession that can arise from an unsatisfied temptation.
The way we choose to deal with our impulses is important.
As long as we respect () ethics, if our behaviour does not hurt anyone and does not harm others or ourselves, temptation can be a good thing .
"If" is not necessary: As long as we respect ethics and our behaviour does not hurt or harm anyone, temptation can be a good thing. (in the original sentence, "that" was incorrect because it can't be used as French "que" to refer back to the previous conjunction)
We can be tempted by an adventure, a challenge, an exciting risk, (to break taboos to challenge/defy the norms, life would be monotonous and unchanging without temptation to move us forward.
However, in the face of negative, illegal, or criminal (desires, by resisting we prove our self-control. or : our self-control helps us (to) resist Summing up the (main point/ (in conclusion: Every (it's a general remark) person has their own free will to take their responsibilities depending on circumstances, weighing up the pros and cons.
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