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Message de somelia posté le 04-11-2008 à 19:35:53 (S | E | F)
bonjour , pouvez vous verifier si j'ai fais des erreurs :

-she didn't eat fruit
-on Sunday , she ate more sweet product than on Thursday.
-She didn't drink enough water (although the coffee and the tea contain water, it is not sufficient )
-She should eat more dairy products
- On two days, she ate more products cerealiers than legumes
-On Tuesday, she ate a dairy product while on Saturday she didn't take it
-On Tuesday, she didn't eat meat while on Thursday she took it twice (chicken and ham)
-0n both days , She drank a lot of coffee and tea
-She ate as ceraliers products on Tuesday as on Mondays
-She ate less on Monday than on Tuesdays

merci d'avance

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Réponse: Correction de azer3, postée le 05-11-2008 à 18:35:20 (S | E)
Bon jour
-she didn't eat fruit.
-on Sunday , she ate more sweet product than on Thursday.
-She didn't drink enough water (although the coffee and the tea contain water, it is not sufficient )
-She should eat more dairy products
- On two days, she ate more cereals products than legumes
-On Tuesday, she ate a dairy product while on Saturday she didn't take it
-On Tuesday, she didn't eat meat while on Thursday she took it twice (chicken and ham)
-0n both days , She drank a lot of coffee and tea.
-She ate as ceraliers products on Tuesday as on Monday.
-She ate less on Monday than on Tuesday.
Bon si tu est entrain de réciter des actions au passé ton excercice est impicable surtout avec l'emploi parfais de forme comparative.Sans oublier des petits fautes
qui je l'ai fait partie.

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