<< Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En bas
Correction dialogue/read the letter
Message de kris51 posté le 11-01-2009 à 20:13:23 (S | E | F)
bonjour
pourriez vous m'aider pour corriger ce dialogue svp j'ai beaucoup de mal en anglais. merci
Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter they are very touched to see that she contains. They decid to call Haibninh to speak with him .the scene takes place in the dining room.
-Haibinh you can come one minute have would like to speak to you.
-Yes one minute I come.
-We have just read your letter with your father and we want to thank you because it touched a lot us.
-I think everything that I wrote inside for a long time but I had never taken time to say it to you.
-Thank you it very pleased us that you speaks to us about it continuous so to work well.
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We too love you
-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 11-01-2009 21:31
titre
Message de kris51 posté le 11-01-2009 à 20:13:23 (S | E | F)
bonjour
pourriez vous m'aider pour corriger ce dialogue svp j'ai beaucoup de mal en anglais. merci
Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter they are very touched to see that she contains. They decid to call Haibninh to speak with him .the scene takes place in the dining room.
-Haibinh you can come one minute have would like to speak to you.
-Yes one minute I come.
-We have just read your letter with your father and we want to thank you because it touched a lot us.
-I think everything that I wrote inside for a long time but I had never taken time to say it to you.
-Thank you it very pleased us that you speaks to us about it continuous so to work well.
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We too love you
-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 11-01-2009 21:31
titre
Réponse: Correction dialogue/read the letter de azer3, postée le 11-01-2009 à 21:03:28 (S | E)
Bonsoir voici mon approche merci de vérifier
Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
-Haibinh you can
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
-Yes one minute
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
-We have just read your letter with your father
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
-I think everything that I wrote inside for a long time but I had never taken time to say it to you
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
-Thank you it very
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We too
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
Tu dois refaire ta rédaction a la lumière de cette correction.
Bonne chance.
Réponse: Correction dialogue/read the letter de kris51, postée le 11-01-2009 à 21:28:02 (S | E)
merco beaucoup pour cette reponse rapide je viens de coriger les points que vous m'avez mentionné mais je n'est reussi a tous les corriger.
Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter and they are very touched to see she contains. They decid to call Haibninh to speak with him .The scene takes place in the dining room.
Haibinh you can come for one minute have we would like to speak to you.
Yes one minute I come.
We have just read your letter with your father and we want to thank you because it touched us a lot.
I think everything that I wrote inside the letter for a long time but I had never taken time to say it to you.
Thank you it pleased us that you speaks to us about it Continue to work well.
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We love you too.
Réponse: Correction dialogue/read the letter de azer3, postée le 11-01-2009 à 22:08:33 (S | E)
D'accord.
Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter and they are very touched to see
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
Haibinh you can
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
Yes one minute I come
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
We have just read your letter with your father
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
I think
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
Thank you it pleased us that you speaks to us about it Continue to work well
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We love you too.
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
Voilà.Corriges toi et je suis la.
Réponse: Correction dialogue/read the letter de kris51, postée le 11-01-2009 à 22:28:39 (S | E)
encore merci pour votre nouvelle reponse voila ma correction
Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter and they are very touched to see that what she contain They decid to call Haibninh to speak with him .The scene took place in the dining room.
Haibinh can you come for one minute we would like to speak to you.
Yes one minute
We have just read your letter and we want to thank you because it touched us a lot.
I think everything that I wrote inside the letter for a long time but I had never taken time to say it to you.
Thank you it pleased us that you speaks to us about it Continue to work well
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We love you too.
Réponse: Correction dialogue/read the letter de azer3, postée le 11-01-2009 à 23:08:39 (S | E)
Voyons alors.
Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter and they are very touched to see that
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
Haibinh can you come for one minute we would like to speak to
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
Yes one minute
We have just read your letter and we want to thank you because it touched us a lot.
I think
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
Thank you it pleased us that you speaks to us about it Continue to work well
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We love you too.
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/attention.gif)
Voilà.