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Message de sunshine24 posté le 12-10-2014 à 17:01:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire à une amie en racontant mon voyage dans une lettre et j'aimerais savoir si j'ai des fautes.
Merci de votre aide en avance
Dear Ariana,
How is it going ? Me, all is well!! I take advantage of my last days in California ! This is a paradise. The sun, the palm trees, the atmosphere, culture ... everything is perfect! I'll tell my stay.
Before everything, the first day,we have done nothing,we just have try to retrieve a time difference of 8 hours between London and Los Angeles.Then,in the evening, we went to see a American football game.It was very interesting, but I had a sore for them haha !
The next day we went swimming in Malibu.Given that Malibu is the capital of surfing, I have tried this sport and it was amaziiiiing !!!
The 3rd day, we made the roller skates in Venice Beach, it was very nice !! Later in the afternoon, I tried to make the jetpack !!! Even if it was complicated at first, after I had the impression of flying over water ;-)
The rest of the week is went so fast BUT, I think yesterday was the best day for me, because on returning to the hotel, I met…..
KATY PERRY .... !!! I'm still speechless !!!
Short, I spend the best holidays of my life !!
CU !!!
Lots of love.
J’espère que je n'ai pas trop de fautes :/
Cordialement
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-10-2014 17:35
Message de sunshine24 posté le 12-10-2014 à 17:01:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire à une amie en racontant mon voyage dans une lettre et j'aimerais savoir si j'ai des fautes.
Merci de votre aide en avance
Dear Ariana,
How is it going ? Me, all is well!! I take advantage of my last days in California ! This is a paradise. The sun, the palm trees, the atmosphere, culture ... everything is perfect! I'll tell my stay.
Before everything, the first day,we have done nothing,we just have try to retrieve a time difference of 8 hours between London and Los Angeles.Then,in the evening, we went to see a American football game.It was very interesting, but I had a sore for them haha !
The next day we went swimming in Malibu.Given that Malibu is the capital of surfing, I have tried this sport and it was amaziiiiing !!!
The 3rd day, we made the roller skates in Venice Beach, it was very nice !! Later in the afternoon, I tried to make the jetpack !!! Even if it was complicated at first, after I had the impression of flying over water ;-)
The rest of the week is went so fast BUT, I think yesterday was the best day for me, because on returning to the hotel, I met…..
KATY PERRY .... !!! I'm still speechless !!!
Short, I spend the best holidays of my life !!
CU !!!
Lots of love.
J’espère que je n'ai pas trop de fautes :/
Cordialement
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-10-2014 17:35
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