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Rack your Brains and Help/ 50

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Message de here4u posté le 12-07-2019 à 22:18:12 (S | E | F)
Hello, dear Friends!

Voici notre première édition de RYB de vacances ! Il est allégé, dans la mesure où, je pense, il vous demandera moins de temps à réaliser (à écrire et rédiger ... ) mais pas vraiment moins si, en travailleurs extrêmement sérieux, vous cherchez la plupart des éléments inconnus ou étonnants ...
Vous pouvez aussi décider de faire ces exercices "à l'économie" (en cherchant un minimum et en n'utilisant que vos connaissances déjà acquises ... ( l'objectif est différent, mais il n'est pas moins louable ...) Et puis, les vacances sont précieuses et le temps avec parents et/ ou amis l'est aussi ... Il faut aussi profiter des possibilités ... Ainsi, ceux qui veulent continuer le travail approfondi peuvent le faire, ceux qui ont moins de temps, n'ont cependant pas à renoncer (précisez-le moi cependant ...)
Cet exercice est un et sera corrigé le vendredi 26 juillet, tard.

I) Please, help my student! Ce texte contient 20 fautes à corriger ! (en majuscules !) (les fautes répétées ne comptent, bien sûr, qu’une fois … )
Why blue jeans are going green…
As consumers become ever more concerned for environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up its act. Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door politics. Anybody can walk in, even without appointment ; through that they create « transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion at late, with labels keen to show their best practice, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly are they.)
By opening up its doors, this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, the 20 employers are happy, and that the jeans are worth to keep - rather than to throw away at the end of each season.
Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant on weekends. More importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey that have personally been visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility. This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ethic, because the manufacture of denim can be heavily polluted.
Saitex International is one such business. Its factory now recycles 98% of water it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.
Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean drink water. Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource. It took the company just six years to earn the money it invested in the water recycling technology.
Some of the big name jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact by using a foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy use by 60.
Yet, what percentage shoppers are currently happy to pay the highest price tag that more ethically sourced jeans often carry? At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, their most expensive jeans cost £260.
When you ask consumers about what are their primary motivations for purchasing in apparel, then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product. Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily sit within the three tops of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing for apparel good.
But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.
They've become a lot more concerned for the societal impact that they're having, weather that's on the environment, the economy, and other area as well.

II. In this text, a few words (10) have been deleted… … Can you fill in the blanks and try to guess the missing words… (Of course, there are several «right possibilities»… Yet, you’re required to choose the most satisfactory ones, fitting the situation.)

Making jeans can … (1) a steep environmental toll, because the dye used to give them their usual … (2) shade - indigo - does not easily stick to the raw cotton. "To get the dye on, we have to dye the … (3) multiple times," he says. "And by dying it multiple times, obviously we need to use more water and more …."(4)
Then a jeans-maker may wash and … (5) the jeans many times to lighten the colour, creating even more waste water. By some estimates it can take … (6) of … (7) of water to make one pair of jeans. Such industries use a huge amount of water, and a huge amount of energy.
In many denim … (8) and jeans factories the … (9) water - which contains the dye, plus bleach and other chemicals - is simply released as waste water. …, (10) a growing number of producers are now eliminating waste water altogether.

Please, give me your best, as always... and I give you THE FORCE...




Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de taiji43, postée le 14-07-2019 à 18:50:40 (S | E)
Hello Here4U

here is my correction , 4 mistakes are still in this try;I don't want to add oher mistakes


READY TO BE CORRECTED

As consumers become ever more concerned ABOUT environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up its act.

Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door POLICY (politique)

Anybody can walk in, even without appointment ; through that they create « transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion OF late (recemment), with labels keen to show their best practice, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly THEY ARE.)

By opening up its doors, this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, the 20 EMPLYEES (employer signifie patron) are happy, and that the jeans are worth KEEPING (ing après worth) - rather than to throw away at the end of each season.

Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant on weekends. More importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey that have personally been visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility.

This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ETHICAL, because the manufacture of denim can be heavily POLLUTING (polluante)(pas polluée)

Saitex International is one such business. Its factory now recycles 98% of water it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.

Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean DRINKING water (eau potable). Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource.

It took the company just six years to earn the money it invested in the water recycling technology.
Some of the big name jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact by using a foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy use ( use =consommation???) by 60.

Yet, what percentage shoppers are currently happy to pay the highest price tag that more ethically sourced jeans often carry?

At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, ITS (son) most expensive jeans cost £260.
When you ask consumers about what their primary motivations ARE for purchasing in apparel, then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product.

Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily sit within the three tops of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing for apparel GOODS (articles)

But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.

They've become a lot more concerned ABOUT the societal impact that they're having, WHETHER (si) that's on the environment, the economy, and other AREAS ( plusieurs domaines???) as well.

Je n'ai pas trouvé les 20 fautes mais 16




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