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Message de bbj17 posté le 11-04-2018 à 10:04:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plait? je suis en première s et j'ai un exposé à faire sur les partis politiques et le Brexit:

Introduction:
England is a constitutional monarchy (political regime with a monarch but a constitution limits its powers) with a parliamentary system (power shared between a government and a parliament). The executive power is exercised by the Government in the name of the Queen.. The members of the Government are chosen by the Prime Minister.. Legislative power is exercised both by the Government and by both chambers of Parliament: the democratically elected House of Commons and the House of Lords. Finally, judicial judicial power is independent of the executive and the legislature, the highest court being the Supreme Court of the United Kingdom.

The different political parties:
the Conservative Party:
The party, founded in 1834, is right centre-right. His ideology is turned towards liberalism. It is also called The Tories. The Conservative Party is made up of local conservative Associations (a tradition that dates back to the Middle Ages and the governance system set up by William the Conqueror) which plays a leading role in the selection of candidates for elections and the Leader designation.

UKIP-The UK Independence Party:
Founded in 1993 as a party for the independence of Great Britain. Anti Immigration anti-Europe. His only member of Parliament in Westminster resigned from the party in the spring of 2017 to sit as an independent.
The party is the most Europhile of the Great British parties. He shared power with the Conservative Party as part of the 2010 to 2015 coalition.

The Liberal Democrats, or LibDems:
Party of the Centre, formed in 1988 by the merger of the Great Liberal Party and the new-born Social Democratic Party (SPD), the latter being formed by dissidents of the Labour Party.
In the 2015 parliamentary elections, the Lib-Dems lost more than three quarters of their deputies, sanctioned by the left centre part of their electorate for having chosen for five years to remain in coalition with the Conservatives.

Greens-The green Party:
Environmental Party in England and Wales is part of the European Green Party and the World Green Party rather a middle class party that in Britain are quite aware of environmental issues. A member of Parliament Caroline Lucas

The Labor Party:
The Labor Party represents the English Democratic Left. Until 2010, Labor Party leaders were elected by three colleges, individual members, parliamentarians, and affiliated unions. In September 2015, party members and other voters elected Jeremy Corbyn as leader.

SNP - Scottish Nationalist party:
founded in 1934 Scottish independence party Currently the largest political party in Scotland, and in power in the Scottish Parliament. Left-wing nationalist party. Their leading figures are Alex Salmond, Nicola Sturgeon (Premier of Scotland) and Angus Robertson (leader of the party's parliamentary group in the House of Commons).
Involvement of each party in brexit

Involvement of the parties in Brexit:
The conservatives:
For forty years the party has been deeply divided over issues of Britain's sovereignty and role in the European Union. A majority of the party members favored a revision of the terms of Britain's accession to the European Union, but against Brexit.

UKIP:
It was led until very recently by Nigel Farage, who led his campaign for Brexit. He left his place on 16 September to Diane James, a MEP very little known to the general public.

Liberal Democrats
The Liberal Democrats were born of a merger between the Liberal Party and the Social Democratic Party. It is a party of the center, in favor of a liberalism-social. He is pro-European.

Green party
against brexit

The Labor Party:
He had spoken against Brexit. Its leader is Jeremy Corbin. He advances ideas of anti-austerity, pro-immigration and social. Since the Brexit, the party has internal problems including the resignation of Shadow Cabinet Minister of Health, Heidi Alexander.

Scottish National Party:
It is pro-European, against brexit defends free education and feminist positions. He militates for the independence of Scotland. Its current leader is Nicolas Sturgeon. Since the referendum of September 18, 2014, when the independence was rejected, the party knows an explosion of the number of its members, they are close to 110 000 today.

conclusion:
Although the majority of the British parties, except the Ukip is against the Brexit, the referendum voted in favour. Except for Scotland who voted against the Brexit.
David Cameron decided in July to give up his position as leader and Prime minister in favour of Theresa May, who, although campaigning for remains, is less opposed to the Brexit.
England and the EU are engaged in talks so that the exit is the least difficult possible.
The consequences are important for the EU as well. This is the first time a country has had it.
Europe (Catalonia, France)
Ireland claiming unification and Scotland claiming to be independent and more recently in France their presidential elections the Pen has proposed in its programme the release of France from the EU.

Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.


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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-04-2018 10:12


Réponse : Exposé/aide de gerondif, postée le 11-04-2018 à 10:44:03 (S | E)
Bonjour
Vous avez traduit des documents tout droit tirés d'internet et intelligemment remixés : exemple:
Lien internet


The conservatives

Le parti, fondé en 1834, est de droite centre-droite. Son idéologie est tournée vers le libéralisme. Il est aussi appelé The Tories. The Conservative Party est à la tête du Royaume-Uni depuis 2010. Les élections générales en 2015 ont permises à David Cameron d’être réélu par une majorité écrasante. Cependant, suite à la décision des citoyens britanniques de quitter l’Union Européenne, David Cameron a décidé en juillet de renoncer à sa place de leader et de premier ministre en faveur de Theresa May qui, bien qu’elle menait campagne pour Remain, est moins opposée au Brexit.

extraits de votre texte.
the Conservative Party:
The party, founded in 1834, is right centre-right. His(vous faites cette erreur tout au long de vos traductions, his à la place de its, he à la place de it) ideology is turned towards liberalism. It is also called The Tories.
David Cameron decided in July to give up his position as leader and Prime minister in favour of Theresa May, who, although campaigning for remains (oui mais là, on a l'impression qu'elle vote pour des restes de nourriture...), is less opposed to the Brexit.

Parfois, vous coupez au milieu d'une phrase:
A member of Parliament Caroline Lucas............

Vous gardez le style journalistique avec des phrases sans sujet ou sans verbe, mais ça ne passe pas en anglais:
Founded in 1993 as a party for the independence of Great Britain. Anti Immigration anti-Europe.






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