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Message de jonew10 posté le 29-03-2009 à 15:34:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
pourriez-vous corriger ces phrases s'il vous plaît?
1)This stay would be an opportunity for me to improve my listening.
2)I am available to work between August 7 and September 28.
3)I would be grateful if you would send me further details of the accommodation.
4)In September I will be starting a university course in engineer.
d'avance.

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Réponse: Correction mistakes de brettdallen, postée le 29-03-2009 à 20:11:53 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
je vous propose quelques éléments de correction..

1)This stay would be an opportunity for me to improve my listening(I would add "comprehension").
2)I am available to work between (or "from")August 7 and(or "to") September 28.
3)I would be grateful if you would("could" is more common) send me further details of the accommodation.
4)In September I will be starting a university course in engineer("engineering").

L'ensemble était correct.
Cordialement.

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