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Correction/many adventurers
Message de yomne posté le 02-05-2009 à 15:14:54
Bonjour à tous,
Je dois rédiger un article sur un exploit.
Merci de bien vouloir me corriger.


The Quatermain tribune,15/09/09

Cordialement

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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-05-2009 15:18
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Modifié par yomne le 03-05-2009 09:41

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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2009 10:06
topic fermé l'auteur ayant effacé le texte qu'on peut voir en-dessous de toute façon !

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Réponse: Correction/many adventurers de yomne, postée le 02-05-2009 à 19:33:25
quelqu'un pourrai m'aider s'il vous plait?

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Réponse: Correction/many adventurers de sadie72, postée le 02-05-2009 à 21:34:21
Hi, yomne
In our world, many adventurers such as W.H Carter, Yves Rossi or Steve Fossett made history.
They have something in common, the will to fulfil their dreams.
Nowadays, a British mountaineer whose name named is John Climbs sets himself a challenge: become the youngest man who to get to the top of the Everest.
He has needed to prepare himself for a long time to not He got ready early enough not to get into trouble.
Before the ascent, he was being interviewed by my colleague about his feelings. Instead of answering, he looked him at in the eyes which were saying how self-confident he was.
John began to climb the ascent at 6 o’clock when the weather conditions are were “less” extreme, about -4° Fahrenheit. His mountain equipments weren’t modern and Mr. Climbs was young. That’s why nobody dared believe in his chance to achieve his goal.
Eventually, after 90 unbearable tough days, one again history has been made History repeated itself: he succeeded in being not only at the top of this huge mountain but also at the top of the world.
1 One week later, in a press conference, he has just said that he was happy. However, it’s almost as if his face was saying “I told you so”.

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Réponse: Correction/many adventurers de yomne, postée le 03-05-2009 à 09:39:49
Thank you!!!

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