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Message de sarah200 posté le 10-05-2009 à 14:47:58 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Voila, pouvez vous m'aider a corriger les fautes dans mon article s'il vous plait.
Voici :
The world leader dedicated to the professions by the water and by the waste, SUEZ environment is delighted at the success of its first environmental countryside. In October, 2008, three months after her(its) stake in stock exchange and the launch of her(its) new visual identity, her(it) reveals her(its) first realization. This countryside articulates around a TV movie diffused on the French national channels and which concentrates on the values of SUEZ environment which are the expertise, the commitment for the planet, the protection of the resources and the sense of the partnership.
The film with a catch line "Make a commitment for the planet is a beautiful company ", is built around metaphors which connect the elements of the nature to those of the company.
So, the capital is represented by the droplet which symbolizes the most precious raw material of the planet and the nature as the capital of life then, the engineer represented by the beaver represents the protection of the planet which is more and more experts' challenge. Other elements are used as a forest of sequoias and a young shoot embodying the evolution and also the presence of a field of flowers connected with the investment because the nature produces some value. The distribution ends with as plan : the planet is " a boss ". This advertising campaign required no shooting, the film is based known about the real images.
The Director General of Suez environment, Dominique Pin, expresses the purpose of Suez environment which is to meet challenges in everyday life. He says that " The seniority and the trump cards which they have are considerable advantages for the future generations today ".
"Our fight is to inform the populations about the sustainable development, their to educate the reflexes to be adapted to be an ecological at the house ".
This countryside holds the biggest record of viewing on Internet, with more than fifteen million persons having looked at him(it) on the famous site You Tube (Lien Internet
) . This countryside stands out as the result of a triumph for this world group from which the fight is to protect the environment and to improve the quality of life.
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Message de sarah200 posté le 10-05-2009 à 14:47:58 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Voila, pouvez vous m'aider a corriger les fautes dans mon article s'il vous plait.
Voici :
The world leader dedicated to the professions by the water and by the waste, SUEZ environment is delighted at the success of its first environmental countryside. In October, 2008, three months after her(its) stake in stock exchange and the launch of her(its) new visual identity, her(it) reveals her(its) first realization. This countryside articulates around a TV movie diffused on the French national channels and which concentrates on the values of SUEZ environment which are the expertise, the commitment for the planet, the protection of the resources and the sense of the partnership.
The film with a catch line "Make a commitment for the planet is a beautiful company ", is built around metaphors which connect the elements of the nature to those of the company.
So, the capital is represented by the droplet which symbolizes the most precious raw material of the planet and the nature as the capital of life then, the engineer represented by the beaver represents the protection of the planet which is more and more experts' challenge. Other elements are used as a forest of sequoias and a young shoot embodying the evolution and also the presence of a field of flowers connected with the investment because the nature produces some value. The distribution ends with as plan : the planet is " a boss ". This advertising campaign required no shooting, the film is based known about the real images.
The Director General of Suez environment, Dominique Pin, expresses the purpose of Suez environment which is to meet challenges in everyday life. He says that " The seniority and the trump cards which they have are considerable advantages for the future generations today ".
"Our fight is to inform the populations about the sustainable development, their to educate the reflexes to be adapted to be an ecological at the house ".
This countryside holds the biggest record of viewing on Internet, with more than fifteen million persons having looked at him(it) on the famous site You Tube (Lien Internet
) . This countryside stands out as the result of a triumph for this world group from which the fight is to protect the environment and to improve the quality of life.
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Modifié par bridg le 10-05-2009 15:15
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Réponse: De l'eau / correction. de laure95, postée le 10-05-2009 à 18:31:29 (S | E)
Bonsoir, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
The world leader dedicated to the professions by
The film with a catch line "Make a commitment for the planet is a beautiful company (enterprise) ", is built around metaphors which connect the elements of
So (thus), the capital is represented by the droplet which symbolizes the most precious raw material of the planet and
The Director General (revois la place de l'adjectif) of Suez environment, Dominique Pin, expresses the purpose of Suez environment which is to meet challenges in our everyday life. He says that " The seniority and the trump cards which they have are considerable advantages for the future generations today ".
"Our fight is to inform the populations about the sustainable development, their to educate the reflexes to be adapted (infinitif) to be an ecological citizen at the house (home) ".
This countryside holds the biggest record of viewing on Internet, with more than fifteen million persons having looked at him(it) on the famous site You Tube (Lien Internet
) . This countryside stands out as the result of a triumph for this world group from which (whose)
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