Correction/I moved from Geneva...

<< Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En bas

[POSTER UNE NOUVELLE REPONSE] [Suivre ce sujet]

Correction/I moved from Geneva...
Message de knt posté le 24-10-2009 à 00:00:59 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir, je voudrais savoir si mes phrases, ci-dessous, sont correctes.

I moved from Geneva [for] 3 years or I moved from Geneva 3 years [ago] ?
My favourite room is, [obviously], my bethroom or My favourite room is, [of course], my bethroom.?
In my bedroom, there's a desk with a computer, so I can do my homework [on it] or chat with my friends on the Internet. I also listen to music and read some books [in it].
I'd love you to visit me [as soon as possible]. I'll really appreciate it !

Merci d'avance =).

-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 24-10-2009 08:26
titre

---

Réponse: Correction/I moved from Geneva... de knt, postée le 24-10-2009 à 00:02:06 (S | E)
Pour la deuxième phrase, je voulais dire "bedroom" et non "bethroom", sorry.

---

Réponse: Correction/I moved from Geneva... de brettdallen, postée le 24-10-2009 à 00:11:39 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Je jette un coup d'œil...
I moved from Geneva [for] 3 years(non!) or I moved from Geneva 3 years [ago] ?
My favourite room is, [obviously], my bethroom(vous l'avez corrigé) or My favourite room is, [of course], my bethroom.?(vous pouvez choisir l'un ou l'autre)
In my bedroom, there's a desk with a computer, so I can do my homework [on it] or chat with my friends on the Internet. I also listen to music and read some books [in it].
&. I'd love you to visit me(or "to pay me a visit") [as soon as possible]. I'll("would") really appreciate it !
Bye!

---

[POSTER UNE NOUVELLE REPONSE] [Suivre ce sujet]

<< Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais