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JFK - correction
Message de lorena12 posté le 01-04-2011 à 22:27:23 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît corriger les fautes présentes dans ce texte ?
Merci.
It's a text of different theory about the death of john kennedy junior. He was piloting a plan but unfortunately it crashed. After that, various rumors have emerged to explain this tragedy . One of the widlest theory is that he was murder by clinton supporters because he planned to stand against hilary in the New York 's election. Other say that it was a attack terrorist. And finally, another theory says that the beautiful blonde Carolyne, interfere the control of the aircraft by calling next him. I think the truth will never be known and that there will always rumors to get noticed.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-04-2011 23:11
Message de lorena12 posté le 01-04-2011 à 22:27:23 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît corriger les fautes présentes dans ce texte ?
Merci.
It's a text of different theory about the death of john kennedy junior. He was piloting a plan but unfortunately it crashed. After that, various rumors have emerged to explain this tragedy . One of the widlest theory is that he was murder by clinton supporters because he planned to stand against hilary in the New York 's election. Other say that it was a attack terrorist. And finally, another theory says that the beautiful blonde Carolyne, interfere the control of the aircraft by calling next him. I think the truth will never be known and that there will always rumors to get noticed.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-04-2011 23:11
Réponse: JFK - correction de gerondif, postée le 01-04-2011 à 23:30:23 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
même constat!Comment rédigez-vous?
It's a text of different theory about the death of john kennedy junior. He was piloting a plan but unfortunately it crashed. After that, various rumors have emerged to explain this tragedy . One of the widlest theory is that he was murder**(participe passé) by clinton supporters because he planned to stand against hilary in the New York 's election. Other(pluriel) say that it was a attack terrorist(ordre des mots). And finally, another theory says that the beautiful blonde Carolyne, interfere(temps) (avec)the control(pluriel) of the aircraft by calling(sens?) next ( ) him. I think the truth will never be known and that there will always (verbe être) rumors to get noticed(sens?).
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