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Italian ecomics crisis

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Italian ecomics crisis
Message de sir_croc posté le 27-11-2011 à 22:15:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,

J'aurais besoin de votre aide s'il vous plaît pour corriger une partie d'un exposé d'anglais.
Je n'ai malheureusement pas pu incorporer les graphiques.
Merci pour vos réponses.

The Italian economics crisis.

Weakness of Italian Economics :

The main weakness of the Italian economics is that she suffers from a low Gross domestic product growth. Thus for six years, the gdp growth was close to zero. As we can see on this graphics, those number, Italy is one of the worste economics in the Eurozone . and the forecasts of growth for 2012 and 2013 are not better.
Another problem is the public debts very high. Indeed the public debts is around 120 % since 2002.
Today the public debts amounts to 1.900 billion euro, it is 118 % of the Gross domestic product of Italy. The deficit is higher , in percentage of the GDP, as than that of Greece and much upper to that of the other European country.
Of this report financial markets, already affect by European sovereign debt crisis, doubt the solvency next of Italy( doutent de la solvabilité future de l'Italie).
So, the rate of the Italian Bonds in six months increase from 3,5 % to 6,5 % between the last month and this month. It is much more raised than those of his neighbors. As we can see on this graph, the long-term rates interest in 10 years exploded and are 2nd the highest, behind Greece.
Now the Italian economics is the fourth of Europe, and third of the Eurozone, behind Germany and France. The GDP of Italy is six times as important that of Greece. A bankruptcy of Italy would have impact more important the Eurozone than that of Greece.

Measures to be set up to boost(relaunch) the growth:

In front of the crisis, Italy has to make reforms to increase its growth. For this Italy has to clean up public finances: the objective is to return the deficit below the 3 % of the GDP before 2012 and to return to the balance before 2014.
To do it the government Silvio Berlusconi has already adopted two austerity plans of 20 billions and 48 billion euro.
This two austerity plans apply to :
On the lute against the tax evasion, which is estimated at more than 100 billion euro by years.
The reduction of the lifestyle of the Gouvernment: the salary of the civil servant is frozen, the number of member of parliament will be divide by two by one.
The privatization of some business sector as the public road network and the electricity supply.
However these measures are considered insufficient by markets and European leaders. Of Italy again has to adopt new measures unpopular and the third austerity plan will be necessary to reassure markets.
The new government should vote one reforms of pension which will lead Italian to retire in 67 years instead of 65.
The new government also an increase of the tax system,
Indeed he should reintroduce the tax on the main home which was deleted in 2008 by Silvio Berlusconi and a new tax for higher incomes will appear
Finally the labor market must be profoundly revised to fight against disparity. The labor market is biased in Italy certain jobs are " excessively protected " while the others are deprived of protections and unemployment insurance. Measures must be operated to favor the youth and women employment.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-11-2011 22:16


Réponse: Italian ecomics crisis de gerondif, postée le 28-11-2011 à 00:18:43 (S | E)
Bonjour,
vous devriez traduire vos textes avec plus d'attention:
vous ou votre façon de traduire laissez les mots dans l'ordre du français:
Another problem is the public debts very high.

She ne peut pas représenter "economics":
The main weakness of the Italian economics is that she suffers

Vous mettez des sujets pluriel et des verbes singuliers:
the public debts is around 120 %

Vous mettez des singuliers ou des pluriels un peu n'importe où:
one reforms of pension : une réforme des retraites.

La lutte et un luth (instrument de musique) sont différents:
On the lute against the tax evasion,

Certaines phrases calquées sur le français n'ont pas de sens:

les rapports de possession sont faux: the government Silvio Berlusconi

Une relecture s'impose.




Réponse: Italian ecomics crisis de sir_croc, postée le 28-11-2011 à 19:38:28 (S | E)
Bonjour,

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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-11-2011 20:03

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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-11-2011 10:44
Correction effacée car une nouvelle correction a été postée en-dessous.



Réponse: Italian ecomics crisis de sir_croc, postée le 29-11-2011 à 09:55:45 (S | E)
Bonjour,

Voici une enieme autre correction, je doute de pouvoir faire mieux. Reste t-il encore des erreurs s'il vous plaît ?
Merci pour vos réponses.

Italy is suffering from lot of structural weaknesses :

The first one is the geographical conformation.
Indeed, we can discern three Italy. The first one is the south of Italy where we ca find a rural economy, the second is Rome and the surrounding area which is dominated by the service sector. For example : the tourist industry. And the last is the North area with cities like Genoa, Milan, Turin, which are dynamics and mainly concentrated in the industrial sector.
The second weakness of Italy is the lack of infrastructures, development and research investment. In the Index of Economic Freedom in 2008, the country ranked 64th in the world and 29th in Europe, it's the lowest rating in the Euro zone. 
In addition, the most recent data shows that in 2006 Italy's spending in Research and development was equal to 1% of GDP, below the EU average of 1.8% and the Lisbon Strategy target of devoting 3% of GDP to research and development activities.
Finally, organized crime is also a strong contributing factor in Italy's economic weakness. 

All those factors make that Italy suffers from a low GDP growth. Thus since 2003, the GDP growth average is of 1,1% only. As we can see on this graphic, those numbers, Italy is one of the worst economy in the Euro zone. And forecasts of growth for 2012 and 2013 follow the same trend.

In addition the sovereign debt is very high. Indeed the public debt is around 120 % since 2002. 
Today it is more than 1.900 billion euro, which is almost 121 % of the GDP. In percentage of the GDP, the deficit is as great as those of Greece and higher than in the others European countries.
Of this report, financial markets which are already affected by European sovereign debt crisis, have doubts about its future solvency.
This is why, in six month, rates interest of Italian's Bonds have increased from 3,5 % to 6,5 % between the last month and this month. Those rates are higher than those of its neighbors. As we can see on this graph, the long-term rates interest in 10 years has exploded and it's now the second one, behind Greece.
But the Italian economy is the fourth in Europe, third in the Euro zone, behind Germany and France. The GDP of Italy is six times more important than those of Greece, then an Italy's bankruptcy would have more consequences than the one of Greece.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-11-2011 10:46




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