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Message de maxi99 posté le 17-11-2012 à 20:45:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Est-ce que vous pouvez corriger ma lettre s'il vous plaît? C'est un universitaire qui écrit depuis son école.
Dear Mother,
It's been two months since I'm in my new school. The atmosphere at the school is very good.
My best friends are Todd and John. Todd is a look a lit sneaky but very extremely shy and intelligent and a little boring and well-manered. John is un respectful of the school rules but friendly and easily-influenced.
In latin, We acted like robots because we are made to repeat again and again.
In Physics We are given reported on experiments.
In Maths, We are given homework asignement .
If We don’t do then, We will be penalized.
with lowe from charle
Merci beaucoup pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-11-2012 20:58
Message de maxi99 posté le 17-11-2012 à 20:45:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Est-ce que vous pouvez corriger ma lettre s'il vous plaît? C'est un universitaire qui écrit depuis son école.
Dear Mother,
It's been two months since I'm in my new school. The atmosphere at the school is very good.
My best friends are Todd and John. Todd is a look a lit sneaky but very extremely shy and intelligent and a little boring and well-manered. John is un respectful of the school rules but friendly and easily-influenced.
In latin, We acted like robots because we are made to repeat again and again.
In Physics We are given reported on experiments.
In Maths, We are given homework asignement .
If We don’t do then, We will be penalized.
with lowe from charle
Merci beaucoup pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-11-2012 20:58
Réponse: Fautes / syntaxe de gerondif, postée le 18-11-2012 à 19:00:22 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
e)Est-ce que vous pouvez corriger ma lettre s'il vous plaît? C'est un universitaire qui écrit depuis son école.
Dear Mother,
It's been two months since I'm(present perfect, règle des depuis) in my new school. The atmosphere at the school is very good.
My best friends are Todd and John. Todd is a look a lit(a bit, a little?) sneaky but very extremely (un en trop)shy and intelligent and a little boring and well-manered. John is un respectful (en un seul mot)of the school rules but friendly and easily influenced.
In latin, We acted like robots because we are made to repeat again and again.
In Physics We are given reported on experiments.
In Maths, We are given homework asignement .
If We don’t do it, then we will be penalized.
with lowe from charle(manque un s)
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