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Message de emlie93501 posté le 14-11-2013 à 17:08:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je devais faire un devoir d'anglais et donc je l'ai fait en français et je l'ai traduit en anglais.
Pourriez-vous me corrigersvp s'il vous plaît?
Numerous inventors have created several inventions to make our lives easier .
The document "British and American inventors" is that names do have different inventors and their inventions .
For example, it has named Willis Carrier who invented air conditioning or Alexander Graham Bell who invented the telephone . These inventions have helped to facilitate our daily lives and make our work less difficult . Indeed telephone invented by Alexander Bell Grahal has facilitated communication between people .
But science rivals with science-fiction in our lives, as we can see in the doc " the time machine " which is an extract from the novel by HG well . In this excerpt , a man, the time traveler, speakink of the creation of the machine back in time. These technologies of science-fiction as the time machine allow people to free themselves from their problems by imagining how the future will be . The time machine for example can imagine the population in the coming years , it will really be possible to travel through time .
To conclude we can say that compete to transform our lives for science to create new technologies to make our lives simpler but science fiction can let go of our imagination to imagine how would our future. Advances in technology have allowed people to live more safely but also to live a more comfortable and modern and therefore make them happier .
Merci d'avance !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-11-2013 22:31
Message de emlie93501 posté le 14-11-2013 à 17:08:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je devais faire un devoir d'anglais et donc je l'ai fait en français et je l'ai traduit en anglais.
Pourriez-vous me corriger
Numerous inventors have created several inventions to make our lives easier .
The document "British and American inventors" is that names do have different inventors and their inventions .
For example, it has named Willis Carrier who invented air conditioning or Alexander Graham Bell who invented the telephone . These inventions have helped to facilitate our daily lives and make our work less difficult . Indeed telephone invented by Alexander Bell Grahal has facilitated communication between people .
But science rivals with science-fiction in our lives, as we can see in the doc " the time machine " which is an extract from the novel by HG well . In this excerpt , a man, the time traveler, speakink of the creation of the machine back in time. These technologies of science-fiction as the time machine allow people to free themselves from their problems by imagining how the future will be . The time machine for example can imagine the population in the coming years , it will really be possible to travel through time .
To conclude we can say that compete to transform our lives for science to create new technologies to make our lives simpler but science fiction can let go of our imagination to imagine how would our future. Advances in technology have allowed people to live more safely but also to live a more comfortable and modern and therefore make them happier .
Merci d'avance !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-11-2013 22:31
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