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Message de mitaine posté le 31-01-2017 à 18:59:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'aurais besoin d'aide pour corriger mes fautes à cet exercice d'expression écrite.
On avait des rapports de stages classés par secteurs, et il fallait en choisir un en rapport avec notre futur stage. Pour la première question, on doit parler de notre projet et expliquer pourquoi on choisi tel ou tel secteur; et dans la seconde on doit comparer en deux paragraphes ce que nous pensions du domaine d'activité par rapport à ce qu'en a retenu le stagiaire. J'ai surtout besoin d'aide pour l'orthographe car même si j'ai essayé de faire simple, ce n'est pas mon fort .
Merci d'avance !
1. I want to do my internship in a sector that isn't in the propositions. My internship search is a little bit special. In fact, I search in studs farms or all kinds of equestrians companies like saddleries or firm of expertise in creation of ridings stables. My professional project is already defined : I want take over the family agricultural company into a stud farm and trade sport horses. My future stud farm 'll be based around four poles : horse livery, coaching, breeding and retail of sport horses. To run this type of business, is necessarily needed administrative, accounting and business knowledge (it's besides why I chose this DUT). My internship will confirm or not my choices of orientation but I am not closed at the idea of discovering other sectors. For this exercise, I chose the administrative sector because I think that my training period will include administrative tasks.
2. I was interested in the rapport about the enterprise ABR. The student participated in very easy administrative tasks. He was astonished to see his colleagues very friendly with customers. They were likeable with him too. The trainee explain that he didn’t do any annoying or difficult tasks. For him, it’s important to choose carefully a small enterprise to not doing that nobody wants.
For me, administrative tasks are mostly boring and repetitive; but it depends of the mission entrusted and atmosphere within the team. I know that it isn’t necessary to generalize because each company is different. Unfortunately, a single person is sometimes enough to return the unpleasant and complicated training period. So, I hope to find a good company.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-01-2017 23:45
Message de mitaine posté le 31-01-2017 à 18:59:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'aurais besoin d'aide pour corriger mes fautes à cet exercice d'expression écrite.
On avait des rapports de stages classés par secteurs, et il fallait en choisir un en rapport avec notre futur stage. Pour la première question, on doit parler de notre projet et expliquer pourquoi on choisi tel ou tel secteur; et dans la seconde on doit comparer en deux paragraphes ce que nous pensions du domaine d'activité par rapport à ce qu'en a retenu le stagiaire. J'ai surtout besoin d'aide pour l'orthographe car même si j'ai essayé de faire simple, ce n'est pas mon fort .
Merci d'avance !
1. I want to do my internship in a sector that isn't in the propositions. My internship search is a little bit special. In fact, I search in studs farms or all kinds of equestrians companies like saddleries or firm of expertise in creation of ridings stables. My professional project is already defined : I want take over the family agricultural company into a stud farm and trade sport horses. My future stud farm 'll be based around four poles : horse livery, coaching, breeding and retail of sport horses. To run this type of business, is necessarily needed administrative, accounting and business knowledge (it's besides why I chose this DUT). My internship will confirm or not my choices of orientation but I am not closed at the idea of discovering other sectors. For this exercise, I chose the administrative sector because I think that my training period will include administrative tasks.
2. I was interested in the rapport about the enterprise ABR. The student participated in very easy administrative tasks. He was astonished to see his colleagues very friendly with customers. They were likeable with him too. The trainee explain that he didn’t do any annoying or difficult tasks. For him, it’s important to choose carefully a small enterprise to not doing that nobody wants.
For me, administrative tasks are mostly boring and repetitive; but it depends of the mission entrusted and atmosphere within the team. I know that it isn’t necessary to generalize because each company is different. Unfortunately, a single person is sometimes enough to return the unpleasant and complicated training period. So, I hope to find a good company.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-01-2017 23:45
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