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Message de marou76 posté le 16-06-2009 à 13:48:02 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Actuellement en 2éme année de DUT j'ai effectué mon stage professionel. Voici le résumé en anglais que j'ai écrit. Est-il possible que vous me donniez votre avis et les corrections eventuels? Merci
Voici mon résumé (dsl pour le nom de l'entreprise et le nom du client que je ne peut communiquer par secret defense):
For ten weeks, I took a training session in (NOM DE l'ENTREPRISE) Company situated in (VILLE) near (VILLE). (NOM DE L'ENTREPRISE) Company is a nearness engineering leader implanted in manufacturing areas, where the activity is.
I was affected to the E.I.A. (Electricity, Instrumentation and Automatism) Engineering Department of the company, which meets calls for tenders for development in the field of practice of Electrical Engineering.
My duty was to contribute with engineers and technicians to the preliminary design of the (NOM DE CLIENT)refinery pumping equipment transfer located in the (EQUIPEMENT) in (VILLE). I participated in several projects like reengineering Low and High Voltage wiring diagrams of the electrical installation, creating a bonding synoptic, Imagining siting diagrams and realize technical schedules.
I have greatly improved my technical knowledge of Electrical Engineering, as well as my relationship in a professional framework. Thanks to this training session, I have completed my academic training and I’m ready to reach my professional expectations.
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Modifié par bridg le 16-06-2009 14:54
Message de marou76 posté le 16-06-2009 à 13:48:02 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Actuellement en 2éme année de DUT j'ai effectué mon stage professionel. Voici le résumé en anglais que j'ai écrit. Est-il possible que vous me donniez votre avis et les corrections eventuels? Merci
Voici mon résumé (dsl pour le nom de l'entreprise et le nom du client que je ne peut communiquer par secret defense):
For ten weeks, I took a training session in (NOM DE l'ENTREPRISE) Company situated in (VILLE) near (VILLE). (NOM DE L'ENTREPRISE) Company is a nearness engineering leader implanted in manufacturing areas, where the activity is.
I was affected to the E.I.A. (Electricity, Instrumentation and Automatism) Engineering Department of the company, which meets calls for tenders for development in the field of practice of Electrical Engineering.
My duty was to contribute with engineers and technicians to the preliminary design of the (NOM DE CLIENT)refinery pumping equipment transfer located in the (EQUIPEMENT) in (VILLE). I participated in several projects like reengineering Low and High Voltage wiring diagrams of the electrical installation, creating a bonding synoptic, Imagining siting diagrams and realize technical schedules.
I have greatly improved my technical knowledge of Electrical Engineering, as well as my relationship in a professional framework. Thanks to this training session, I have completed my academic training and I’m ready to reach my professional expectations.
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Modifié par bridg le 16-06-2009 14:54
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