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Message de marou76 posté le 16-06-2009 à 15:15:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Actuellement en 2éme année de DUT j'ai effectué mon stage professionnel. Voici le résumé en anglais que j'ai écrit. Est-il possible que vous me donniez votre avis et les corrections eventuelles? Merci
Voici mon résumé :
For ten weeks, I took a training session in xxx Company situated in xxx near xxx. xxxCompany is a nearness engineering leader implanted in manufacturing areas, where the activity is.
I was affected to the E.I.A. (Electricity, Instrumentation and Automatism) Engineering Department of the company, which meets calls for tenders for development in the field of practice of Electrical Engineering.
My duty was to contribute with engineers and technicians to the preliminary design of the xxx refinery pumping equipment transfer located in the xxx in xxx. I participated in several projects like reengineering Low and High Voltage wiring diagrams of the electrical installation, creating a bonding synoptic, Imagining siting diagrams and realize technical schedules.
I have greatly improved my technical knowledge of Electrical Engineering, as well as my relationship in a professional framework. Thanks to this training session, I have completed my academic training and I’m ready to reach my professional expectations.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-06-2009 15:17
Message de marou76 posté le 16-06-2009 à 15:15:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Actuellement en 2éme année de DUT j'ai effectué mon stage professionnel. Voici le résumé en anglais que j'ai écrit. Est-il possible que vous me donniez votre avis et les corrections eventuelles? Merci
Voici mon résumé :
For ten weeks, I took a training session in xxx Company situated in xxx near xxx. xxxCompany is a nearness engineering leader implanted in manufacturing areas, where the activity is.
I was affected to the E.I.A. (Electricity, Instrumentation and Automatism) Engineering Department of the company, which meets calls for tenders for development in the field of practice of Electrical Engineering.
My duty was to contribute with engineers and technicians to the preliminary design of the xxx refinery pumping equipment transfer located in the xxx in xxx. I participated in several projects like reengineering Low and High Voltage wiring diagrams of the electrical installation, creating a bonding synoptic, Imagining siting diagrams and realize technical schedules.
I have greatly improved my technical knowledge of Electrical Engineering, as well as my relationship in a professional framework. Thanks to this training session, I have completed my academic training and I’m ready to reach my professional expectations.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-06-2009 15:17
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