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Message de moonlit-sunset posté le 30-04-2011 à 09:24:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous
Je souhaiterais avoir votre avis sur la formulation que j'ai utilisée dans cette lettre de motivation :
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you in response to your advertisement for a Project Manager published on the website www.freelance-info.fr.
I have noted, in adequacy with my competences, the technical, organizational and human (TOH) dimensions of the job, as well as the necessary autonomy of the wanted practitioner.
During the seventeen years I have spent in the industry (in small businesses, small and medium-sized industries as well as in major companies), I have had to set up and install many complex programs of integration of information systems.
My regular collaboration with leading companies, as well as the successful methodology I used to implement the new corporate management system of the leader in sea products, allow me to believe in my future efficiency within your company.
I would be grateful for an interview to discuss the specific ways in which I could help your organization. Of course, you may contact me at any time. Until then, thank you for your consideration and I look forward to meeting with you.
Sincerely,
Enc. : C.V.
Un grand merci d'avance !
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Modifié par bridg le 30-04-2011 09:34
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Message de moonlit-sunset posté le 30-04-2011 à 09:24:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous
Je souhaiterais avoir votre avis sur la formulation que j'ai utilisée dans cette lettre de motivation :
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you in response to your advertisement for a Project Manager published on the website www.freelance-info.fr.
I have noted, in adequacy with my competences, the technical, organizational and human (TOH) dimensions of the job, as well as the necessary autonomy of the wanted practitioner.
During the seventeen years I have spent in the industry (in small businesses, small and medium-sized industries as well as in major companies), I have had to set up and install many complex programs of integration of information systems.
My regular collaboration with leading companies, as well as the successful methodology I used to implement the new corporate management system of the leader in sea products, allow me to believe in my future efficiency within your company.
I would be grateful for an interview to discuss the specific ways in which I could help your organization. Of course, you may contact me at any time. Until then, thank you for your consideration and I look forward to meeting with you.
Sincerely,
Enc. : C.V.
Un grand merci d'avance !
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Modifié par bridg le 30-04-2011 09:34
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