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Message de douie posté le 03-06-2011 à 22:24:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Je sais que ce sujet est très demandé mais je postule pour plusieurs stages enIreland Irlande 
et en Angleterre dans une entreprise de génie des procédés.
Voici ma lettre de demande de stage; pourriez-vous s'il vous plaît me dire s'il y a des erreurs ?
Dear Sir,
I am approaching you today thanks to Mr XX who communicate me your email.
Indeed, I am studying process engineering at [Nom_école] in [Ville] and I am looking for a work placement to finish my fourth grade. (En gros ma quatrième année après le bac).
To obtain my diploma, it is essential to have work experience in an English firm.
I am hoping to work for an international firm and would be particulary pleased to have some training in your firm which keeps developing.
A three months experience period is a compulsary part of my course, and the report which I will
write about my placement in your company will be presented orally for an examination.
Moreover, a placement in your firm would enable me to perfect my English.
I will be more than motivated to work in the wonderful country which is Ireland and to fit in a team like yours.
I would be very grateful if you would agree to give me a placement in your firm from X to X. I am aware that my request is early and I need an answer before the 30th September 2011.
Work experience in English firm would enable me to gain the knowledge of international business practise which I need.
Yours faithfully
J'aimerais vraiment leur faire comprendre que je suis ultra motivée pour ce stage !
Vos suggestions ?
Merci beaucoup !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-06-2011 09:00
Message de douie posté le 03-06-2011 à 22:24:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Je sais que ce sujet est très demandé mais je postule pour plusieurs stages en
et en Angleterre dans une entreprise de génie des procédés.Voici ma lettre de demande de stage; pourriez-vous s'il vous plaît me dire s'il y a des erreurs ?
Dear Sir,
I am approaching you today thanks to Mr XX who communicate me your email.
Indeed, I am studying process engineering at [Nom_école] in [Ville] and I am looking for a work placement to finish my fourth grade. (En gros ma quatrième année après le bac).
To obtain my diploma, it is essential to have work experience in an English firm.
I am hoping to work for an international firm and would be particulary pleased to have some training in your firm which keeps developing.
A three months experience period is a compulsary part of my course, and the report which I will
write about my placement in your company will be presented orally for an examination.
Moreover, a placement in your firm would enable me to perfect my English.
I will be more than motivated to work in the wonderful country which is Ireland and to fit in a team like yours.
I would be very grateful if you would agree to give me a placement in your firm from X to X. I am aware that my request is early and I need an answer before the 30th September 2011.
Work experience in English firm would enable me to gain the knowledge of international business practise which I need.
Yours faithfully
J'aimerais vraiment leur faire comprendre que je suis ultra motivée pour ce stage !
Vos suggestions ?
Merci beaucoup !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-06-2011 09:00
Réponse: Lettre/stage Irlande-Angleterre de notrepere, postée le 08-06-2011 à 04:21:57 (S | E)
HelloDear Sir,
I am approaching you today thanks to Mr XX who communicated your email to me.
Indeed, I am studying process engineering at [Nom_école] in [Ville] and I am looking for a work placement to finish my fourth
To obtain my diploma, it is essential to have work experience in an English firm. I am hoping to work for an international firm and would be particularly pleased to have some training in your firm which keeps developing [pas les meilleurs mots].
A three-month experience period is a compulsory part of my course, and the report which I will write about my placement in your company will be presented orally for an examination.
Moreover, a placement in your firm would enable me to perfect my English.
I will be more than motivated to work in the your wonderful country
I would be very grateful if you would agree to give me a placement in your firm from X to X. I am aware that my request is early and I need an answer before the 30th September 2011.
Work experience in an English firm would enable me to gain the knowledge of international business practise which I require.
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