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Correction /Lettre de motivation
Message de alleyway posté le 30-11-2011 à 22:37:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je postule pour un stage en Allemagne en tant que chargée de communication, je dois réaliser ma lettre de motivation en anglais.
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à la corriger s'il vous plaît ?
Par avance, merci ;)
Dear Madam / Sir,
I’m actually a studio photographer in a retail firm in France. Thanks to my studies and my work experiences, I worked in many fraimworks of the communication. Today, I wish reorient my career to become a communication officer.
My country finances international internships for young workers. It could be a chance for me to have a first experience as communication officer, that’s why I wish to do this internship into your firm. I want to go to another country because I want to discover a new culture, another way to think and to work and also to practice my English and Deutsch. Berlin is an attractive town due to its cultural diversity and its open-mindedness.
I’am a creative, curious and organized person. I have good communication and adaptability skills. I express my sensitivity through my fashion blog and my lomography work.
Please find my résumé attached. I remain at your disposal should you require any further information.
Yours faithfully,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-12-2011 09:35
Message de alleyway posté le 30-11-2011 à 22:37:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je postule pour un stage en Allemagne en tant que chargée de communication, je dois réaliser ma lettre de motivation en anglais.
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à la corriger s'il vous plaît ?
Par avance, merci ;)
Dear Madam / Sir,
I’m actually a studio photographer in a retail firm in France. Thanks to my studies and my work experiences, I worked in many fraimworks of the communication. Today, I wish reorient my career to become a communication officer.
My country finances international internships for young workers. It could be a chance for me to have a first experience as communication officer, that’s why I wish to do this internship into your firm. I want to go to another country because I want to discover a new culture, another way to think and to work and also to practice my English and Deutsch. Berlin is an attractive town due to its cultural diversity and its open-mindedness.
I’am a creative, curious and organized person. I have good communication and adaptability skills. I express my sensitivity through my fashion blog and my lomography work.
Please find my résumé attached. I remain at your disposal should you require any further information.
Yours faithfully,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-12-2011 09:35
Réponse: Correction /Lettre de motivation de notrepere, postée le 30-11-2011 à 23:25:02 (S | E)
BonjourVotre texte contient peu d'erreurs.
I’m actually a studio photographer in a retail firm in France. Thanks to my studies and my work experiences, I have worked in many fraimworks (orthographe) of the communication [n'a pas de sens]. Today, I wish to reorient my career to become a communications officer.
My country finances international internships for young workers. It could be a chance for me to
I’am a creative, curious and organized person. I have good communication and adaptability skills. I express my sensitivity
through my fashion blog and my lomography work.Please find my résumé attached. I remain at your disposal should you require any further information.
Réponse: Correction /Lettre de motivation de alleyway, postée le 03-12-2011 à 11:30:30 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup !!
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