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Message de asus21 posté le 09-01-2012 à 14:51:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous et bonne année !
J'ai rédigé un rapport que je dois remettre à mon professeur et j'aurais voulu savoir s'il vous plaît si mon anglais était correct.
Merci d'avance.
REPORT ON IMPROV PRESENTATION
TERMS OF REFERENCE
To give a presentation about my internship. I described products and services marketed in store. I explained the unique aspects of this product/service (quality, performance, design and specification). I drew the conclusion on the evolution of products in time
PROCEDURE
I use the sheets in my Booklet as a guide to prepare information about my presentation. Information was obtained on the intranet of the company and thanks to the firm’s manuals. I research some information on the database of the ESC Dijon’s school. I also asked the Managing Director when I needed details which were not specified on the intranet.
INFORMATION
- I read attentively the orders registered in my Booklet not to make mistakes. I asked questions to my teacher.
- I made a Brainstorming of my ideas. I fetched of the information in my report of internship.
- I drafted my presentation by completing every point of the guide and by respecting the orders.
- I read again my presentation to me in front of the mirror several times.
CONCLUSION
I was rather proud of my work and my presentation in front of the class.
RECOMMENDATIONS
- To be more welcoming and dynamic.
- I need to work a bit on my comprehension though.
Merci à vous.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-01-2012 15:34
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Message de asus21 posté le 09-01-2012 à 14:51:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous et bonne année !
J'ai rédigé un rapport que je dois remettre à mon professeur et j'aurais voulu savoir s'il vous plaît si mon anglais était correct.
Merci d'avance.
REPORT ON IMPROV PRESENTATION
TERMS OF REFERENCE
To give a presentation about my internship. I described products and services marketed in store. I explained the unique aspects of this product/service (quality, performance, design and specification). I drew the conclusion on the evolution of products in time
PROCEDURE
I use the sheets in my Booklet as a guide to prepare information about my presentation. Information was obtained on the intranet of the company and thanks to the firm’s manuals. I research some information on the database of the ESC Dijon’s school. I also asked the Managing Director when I needed details which were not specified on the intranet.
INFORMATION
- I read attentively the orders registered in my Booklet not to make mistakes. I asked questions to my teacher.
- I made a Brainstorming of my ideas. I fetched of the information in my report of internship.
- I drafted my presentation by completing every point of the guide and by respecting the orders.
- I read again my presentation to me in front of the mirror several times.
CONCLUSION
I was rather proud of my work and my presentation in front of the class.
RECOMMENDATIONS
- To be more welcoming and dynamic.
- I need to work a bit on my comprehension though.
Merci à vous.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-01-2012 15:34
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