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Message de alienw posté le 03-01-2014 à 15:00:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous !
J'aimerais avoir un peu d'aide pour corriger ma lettre de motivation de demande de stage en anglais. C'est la première fois que j'en fais une alors je ne doute pas qu'il doit y avoir des fautes
Merci d'avance !
Object: Internship request for 4th year in engineering school at XXXX
Dear Sir or Madam,
As a current student in my 4th year at XXXX located in France, in Pau, I am contacting you to request an internship at your company, for the period of the 1st April 2014 to the 31th July 2014.
I have been interested in computer science since my childhood, and more precisely in System & Network since my BTS. During my studies, I was able to gain knowledge in this field, with a preference for Windows’s systems, in which I’m currently trying to specialize myself.
Your company, with its serious international reputation, could effectively allow me to acquire more experience in business and gain or perfect my technical and project management skills. Moreover this internship would be such a great opportunity for me to be familiar with the business in your country.
My last professional experiences, at XXXXX in XXXX, allowed me to be familiar with the work in open space, which brought me more about collaborative work.
I am completely available to provide you with any further information you may require regarding my candidacy.
Thank you for your time and consideration. Best regards,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-01-2014 18:56
Message de alienw posté le 03-01-2014 à 15:00:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous !
J'aimerais avoir un peu d'aide pour corriger ma lettre de motivation de demande de stage en anglais. C'est la première fois que j'en fais une alors je ne doute pas qu'il doit y avoir des fautes
Merci d'avance !
Object: Internship request for 4th year in engineering school at XXXX
Dear Sir or Madam,
As a current student in my 4th year at XXXX located in France, in Pau, I am contacting you to request an internship at your company, for the period of the 1st April 2014 to the 31th July 2014.
I have been interested in computer science since my childhood, and more precisely in System & Network since my BTS. During my studies, I was able to gain knowledge in this field, with a preference for Windows’s systems, in which I’m currently trying to specialize myself.
Your company, with its serious international reputation, could effectively allow me to acquire more experience in business and gain or perfect my technical and project management skills. Moreover this internship would be such a great opportunity for me to be familiar with the business in your country.
My last professional experiences, at XXXXX in XXXX, allowed me to be familiar with the work in open space, which brought me more about collaborative work.
I am completely available to provide you with any further information you may require regarding my candidacy.
Thank you for your time and consideration. Best regards,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-01-2014 18:56
Réponse: Lettre motivation /stage de carr30, postée le 03-01-2014 à 16:08:59 (S | E)
Hello
Some pointers in blue
Good luck with the application
Dear Sir or Madam,
As a current student in my 4th year at XXXX located in France, in Pau, I am contacting you to request an internship at your company, for the period of the 1st April 2014 to the 31th July 2014.
I have been interested in computer science since my childhood, and more precisely in System & Network ..( ..management?/..design?/..support?/..development?....or 'systems and networks') since my BTS. During my studies, I was able to gain knowledge in this field, with a preference for MS? Windows
Your company, with its serious international reputation, could effectively allow me to acquire more experience in business and gain or perfect my technical and project management skills. Moreover this internship would be such a great opportunity for me to be familiar with the business in your country.
My last professional experiences, at XXXXX in XXXX, allowed me to be familiar with
I am completely available to provide you with any further information you may require regarding my candidacy.
Thank you for your time and consideration. Best regards,
Réponse: Lettre motivation /stage de alienw, postée le 03-01-2014 à 17:01:25 (S | E)
Hi
thanks for your answer !
I'll correct it right now ^^ and wait if other people have other propositions or remark.
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