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Message de here4u posté le 01-03-2026 à 18:54:28 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,
Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...
Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m'avaient dit être gênés d'exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l'impression - souvent fausse - de les exprimer maladroitement ). Dautre part, vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :
1) What's your favourite occupation?
2) Are we threatened by individualism?
3) If you were an animal, which one would you like to be? Why?
Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix en mp en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu'à atteindre en tout un maximum d'environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d'abord pendant deux jours, sans donner 'votre solution') puis en vert. Une fois le premier texte 'corrigé' au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc !) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...
Cet exercice sera corrigé le jeudi 12 mars 2026 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Message de here4u posté le 01-03-2026 à 18:54:28 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,
Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...
Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m'avaient dit être gênés d'exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l'impression - souvent fausse - de les exprimer maladroitement ). Dautre part, vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :
1) What's your favourite occupation?
2) Are we threatened by individualism?
3) If you were an animal, which one would you like to be? Why?
Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix en mp en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu'à atteindre en tout un maximum d'environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d'abord pendant deux jours, sans donner 'votre solution') puis en vert. Une fois le premier texte 'corrigé' au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc !
) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...Cet exercice sera corrigé le jeudi 12 mars 2026 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Réponse : Let's suggest 104/ Taking it easy 50 de here4u, postée le 03-03-2026 à 23:15:20 (S | E)
Hello dears,
Here is our first ANSWER:
ANSWER A: Topic 3 please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
If you were an animal which one would you like to be? Why?
If I could turn into an animal, I would see myself as an elephant in the African Savannah.
I would be tall, enormous, imposing as a symbol of strength and power.
And especially I would have a phenomenal memory and be able to solve complex problems, knowing how to use the tools. Remaining, however, gentle and sensitive and sociable, I would feel and still express emotions like joy,
empathy, anger. I would live in a family, altruistic and supportive.
My body language, as much as my voice, would be very expressive and comprehensible.
Without being a dominator, or a predator, I would be respected because even the lion king would not approach me.
I would live in freedom, in the open air, in vast spaces. I would not have any enemies, except human beings who are wilder than the animals of the Savannah.
for your help! 
Réponse : Let's suggest 104/ Taking it easy 50 de here4u, postée le 04-03-2026 à 13:11:58 (S | E)
Hello dears!
No inspiration?
Réponse : Let's suggest 104/ Taking it easy 50 de gerold, postée le 05-03-2026 à 10:52:53 (S | E)
Hello!
ANSWER A: Topic 3 please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
A very good text.
If you were an animal which one would you like to be? Why?
If I could turn into an animal, I would see myself as an elephant in the African Savannah.
I would be tall, enormous, imposing as a symbol of strength and power.
And especially I would have a phenomenal memory and be able to solve complex problems, knowing how to use the tools. Remaining, however, gentle and sensitive and sociable, I would feel and still express emotions like joy,
empathy, anger. I would live in a family, altruistic and supportive (word order?).
My body language, as much as my voice, would be very expressive and comprehensible.
Without being a dominator, or a predator, I would be respected because even the lion king would not approach me.
I would live in freedom, in the open air, in vast spaces. I would not have any enemies, except human beings who are wilder than the animals of the Savannah.
Réponse : Let's suggest 104/ Taking it easy 50 de here4u, postée le 06-03-2026 à 10:46:00 (S | E)
Hello!
ANSWER A: Topic 3
A very good text.
my indications.
If you were an animal which one would you like to be? Why?
If I could turn into an animal, I would see myself as an elephant in the African Savannah.
I would be tall, enormous, imposing as a symbol of strength and power.
And especially I would have a phenomenal memory and be able to solve complex problems, knowing how to use the tools
. Remaining, however, gentle and sensitive and sociable, I would feel and still express emotions like joy,empathy, anger. I would live in a family, altruistic and supportive (word order?).
My body language, as much as my voice, would be very expressive and comprehensible.
Without being a dominator, or a predator, I would be respected because even the lion king would not approach me.
I would live in freedom, in the open air, in vast spaces. I would not have any enemies, except human beings who are wilder than the animals of the Savannah.
A very good text, indeed!
Green required.
Réponse : Let's suggest 104/ Taking it easy 50 de magie8, postée le 06-03-2026 à 11:34:14 (S | E)
ANSWER A: Topic 3
.THANK YOU GEROLD and HERE4U FOR YOUR HELP
my CORRECTION.
If you were an animal which one, would you like to be? Why?
If I could turn into an animal, I would see myself as an elephant in the African Savannah.
I would be tall, enormous, imposing as a symbol of strength and power.
And especially I would have a phenomenal memory and be able to solve complex problems, I would know to find (the appropriate tools and tips to help me in difficult tasks. ( I would be still gentle, sensitive and sociable, feeling and expressing emotions like joy,empathy, anger. I would live in (an altruistic and supportive family.
My body language, as much as my voice, would be very expressive and comprehensible.
Without being a dominator, or a predator, I would be respected because even the lion king would not approach me.
I would live in freedom, in the open air, in vast spaces. I would not have any enemies, except human beings who are wilder than the animals of the Savannah.
Réponse : Let's suggest 104/ Taking it easy 50 de gerold, postée le 06-03-2026 à 14:14:12 (S | E)
Hello!
MagieANSWER A: Topic 3
If you were an animal which one, would you like to be? Why?
If I could turn into an animal, I would see myself as an elephant in the African Savannah.
I would be tall, enormous, imposing as a symbol of strength and power.
And especially I would have a phenomenal memory and be able to solve complex problems, I would know to find (the appropriate tools and tips to help me in difficult tasks. ( I would be still* gentle, sensitive and sociable, feeling and expressing emotions like joy,empathy, anger. I would live in (an altruistic and supportive family. Altruistic and supportive, I would live in a family. (Do the adjectives qualify the elephant or the family in the original text?))
My body language, as much as my voice, would be very expressive and comprehensible.
Without being a dominator, or a predator, I would be respected because even the lion king would not approach me.
I would live in freedom, in the open air, in vast spaces. I would not have any enemies, except human beings who are wilder than the animals of the Savannah.
* I'm not sure I understand what "still" would mean here (toujours, encore, aussi, cependant?), and in the original text: I would feel and still express emotions ...
Réponse : Let's suggest 104/ Taking it easy 50 de here4u, postée le 06-03-2026 à 15:54:21 (S | E)
Hello dears,
Merci à vous de ce bon travail. Nous y reviendrons en fin de quinzaine.
ANSWER B: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
If you were an animal, which one would you like to be? Why?
If I were an animal, no doubt I'd like to be a cat. Any cat? No, of course no... For I'd really like to be my own cat! And why ?Because I would see my familiar world through her eyes, and I am very curious about this. Sometimes, looking at her, I wonder: « What is behind this quiet and mysterious stare? What does she feel, what does she understand, when she looks at me while I do those strange things like hanging out the washing, or pulling out the weeds, or arranging flowers in a vase ? What does she understand about our lives at home? Does she have an opinion about us humans? Does she see us as all-powerful super-beings, or rather as ridiculous and presomptuous creatures, figuring they're masters of the world, while they're just ridiculous and presomptuous fools knowing nothing about Feline Wisdom ? »
for your help! Réponse : Let's suggest 104/ Taking it easy 50 de gerold, postée le 06-03-2026 à 18:16:33 (S | E)
Hello!
ANSWER B: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
If you were an animal, which one would you like to be? Why?
A very ywitty text.
If I were an animal, no doubt I'd like to be a cat. Any cat? No, of course no... For I'd really like to be my own cat! And why ?Because I would see my familiar world through her eyes, and I am very curious about this. Sometimes, looking at her, I wonder: « What is behind this quiet and mysterious stare? What does she feel, what does she understand, when she looks at me while I do those strange things like hanging out the washing, or pulling out the weeds, or arranging flowers in a vase ? What does she understand about our lives at home? Does she have an opinion about us humans? Does she see us as all-powerful super-beings, or rather as ridiculous and presomptuous creatures, figuring they're masters of the world, while?? (I would use another conjunction, but I'm not sure) they're just ridiculous and presomptuous (avoid repetition if possible) fools knowing nothing about Feline Wisdom ? »
Réponse : Let's suggest 104/ Taking it easy 50 de peggy06, postée le 07-03-2026 à 08:17:08 (S | E)
If I were an animal I would want to be a tiger living in the savanah _It represents strengh an flexibility
It is a beautiful animal that fascinate me _ In the jungle , very few animals approached him
Living often apart from the other animals he is protective of his family
Yes he is wild and feed himself with life animal preys but it's the law of the jungle
Réponse : Let's suggest 104/ Taking it easy 50 de happynutmeg13, postée le 07-03-2026 à 15:44:22 (S | E)
Hello!
Je propose, avec l'aide de gerold :
Hello!
ANSWER B: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
If you were an animal, which one would you like to be? Why?
A very ywitty text.
If I were an animal, no doubt I'd like to be a cat. Any cat? No, of course no... For I'd really like to be my own cat! And why ?Because I would see my familiar world through her eyes, and I am very curious about this. Sometimes, looking at her, I wonder: « What is behind this quiet and mysterious stare? What does she feel, what does she understand, when she looks at me while I do doing those strange things like hanging out the washing, or pulling out the no article weeds, or arranging flowers in a vase ? What does she understand about our lives at home? Does she have an opinion about us humans? Does she see us as all-powerful super-beings all-mighty beings, or rather as ridiculous and presomptuous creatures, figuring they're masters of the world, while?? (I would use another conjunction, but I'm not sure)whereas ? they're just ridiculous and presomptuous (avoid repetition if possible)overbold ? fools knowing nothing about Feline Wisdom ? »
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Réponse : Let's suggest 104/ Taking it easy 50 de gerold, postée le 07-03-2026 à 17:56:14 (S | E)
Hello!
HappynutmegANSWER B: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
If you were an animal, which one would you like to be? Why?
A very witty text.
If I were an animal, no doubt I'd like to be a cat. Any cat? No, of course no... For I'd really like to be my own cat! And why'? Because I would see my familiar world through her eyes, and I am very curious about this. Sometimes, looking at her, I wonder: « What is behind this quiet and mysterious stare? What does she feel, what does she understand, when she looks at me while I am doing those strange things like hanging out the washing, or pulling out
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Modifié par gerold le 07-03-2026 17:59
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