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To be a famous personality (correct°)
Message de Ophely posté le 27-10-2005 à 18:23:39 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour
J'aimerais s'il vous plait qu'on me corrige un texte que j'ai rédigé car j'ai des difficultés en anglais et donc je ne suis pas certaine que mes phrases aient toutes un sens. Merci d'avance.Voici le texte :
To be a famous personality has advantages and disadvantages.
Personally, I wouldn’t to be a famous personality because I think they mustn’t feel themselves very free. For example they can’t quietly walk in the street because everybody know them and want to speak them. Secondly, they often have bit private life because of Medias that broadcast it on TV or in newspapers. Besides, their family must agree with that because their life is too showed. Moreover, famous personalities may have a parapet with them to their security. I wouldn’t resent all that.
On the other hand, famous personalities are in general riche. It’s an advantage but money can’t buy you happiness. What are more they always are good-looking thanks to their personals hairdresser and designer. It’s good but actually they don’t seem natural.
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Edité par bridg le 27-10-2005 18:43
Message de Ophely posté le 27-10-2005 à 18:23:39 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour
J'aimerais s'il vous plait qu'on me corrige un texte que j'ai rédigé car j'ai des difficultés en anglais et donc je ne suis pas certaine que mes phrases aient toutes un sens. Merci d'avance.Voici le texte :
To be a famous personality has advantages and disadvantages.
Personally, I wouldn’t to be a famous personality because I think they mustn’t feel themselves very free. For example they can’t quietly walk in the street because everybody know them and want to speak them. Secondly, they often have bit private life because of Medias that broadcast it on TV or in newspapers. Besides, their family must agree with that because their life is too showed. Moreover, famous personalities may have a parapet with them to their security. I wouldn’t resent all that.
On the other hand, famous personalities are in general riche. It’s an advantage but money can’t buy you happiness. What are more they always are good-looking thanks to their personals hairdresser and designer. It’s good but actually they don’t seem natural.
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Edité par bridg le 27-10-2005 18:43
Réponse: To be a famous personality (correct°) de alexgowes, postée le 27-10-2005 à 23:53:05 (S | E)
Personally, I wouldn’t want/like to be a famous personality because I think they mustn’t feel themselves very free. For example they can’t quietly walk in the street because everybody knows them and wants to speak with them. Secondly, they often have
On the other hand, famous personalities are in general
In English, don't put an "s" after an adjective even if the noun is plural: A personal hairdresser. One hundred personal hairdressers.
A blue sky. Blue skies.
A big car. Big cars.
Note: medium/media follow their Latin origins. The singular is medium, the plural is media. Do not add an "s"!
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Edité par alexgowes le 27-10-2005 23:57
Réponse: To be a famous personality (correct°) de kayna775, postée le 28-10-2005 à 01:17:41 (S | E)
que veut dire what's more?
Réponse: To be a famous personality (correct°) de alexgowes, postée le 28-10-2005 à 02:40:24 (S | E)
What's more = De plus
Réponse: To be a famous personality (correct°) de ophely, postée le 28-10-2005 à 13:37:23 (S | E)
merci beaucoup alexgowes cette correction m'est très utile.
Réponse: To be a famous personality (correct°) de kayna775, postée le 29-10-2005 à 01:44:52 (S | E)
merci c'est très gentil