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Message de babysarah1981 posté le 22-03-2006 à 19:26:11 (S | E | F | I)
Aprés la gentille aide de Smonin, j'ai repris quelques phrases dans ma lettre: ça m'a l'air bon mais si quelqu'un pouvait juste la checker un dernier coup au cas ou....ce serait adorable!
Merciiiiiiiiiii
Sarah
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Dear ***:
I am writing in order to apply for an internship for the coming summer. I would sincerely enjoy the possibility of working for several weeks with (nom de l’organisation) in particular in the fields of (domaines d'activités de l'organisation) *** or ***. I am indeed very interested in the international stakes which these fields represent, and I would like to benefit from the challenge and the undeniable experience I would gain while working in your organization.
As you can see on the enclosed resume, I am a graduate of the University of the *** in Paris, with a DEA (Master) in international law. I am currently enrolled in a Master program of public international law at the University of Montreal, where I take courses such as law and minorities and sovereignty and globalization, in which I work more precisely on the cultural diversity. I have a full understanding of both private and public international law, though my skills are not limited to that field. Indeed, through my various professional experiences, I have acquired a great capacity of involvement and organization , and also a lot of adaptability. I have also had the opportunity to work outside of France, particularly in Turkey, the United States, and Peru, very often as part of a team. These experiences have made me more flexible and board-minded, and have provided me with a very good sense of initiative.
I am ready to invest fully and I am not afraid to confront problems or to take on new challenges. I see both as opportunities to gain even more experience and skills. I know that I will offer you, in addition to my abilities, my enthusiasm and my positive thinking, and that I will be able to make a meaningful contribution to ***.
If possible, I would like to work during the 8 weeks from June 5 to July 28. However, I remain open to the possibility of other dates if these dates are not convenient.
Please contact me for any other information that you might need regarding my application,
Thanking you for your attention,
Sincerely,
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Modifié par bridg le 22-03-2006 20:00
Divers
Message de babysarah1981 posté le 22-03-2006 à 19:26:11 (S | E | F | I)
Aprés la gentille aide de Smonin, j'ai repris quelques phrases dans ma lettre: ça m'a l'air bon mais si quelqu'un pouvait juste la checker un dernier coup au cas ou....ce serait adorable!
Merciiiiiiiiiii
Sarah
*******
Dear ***:
I am writing in order to apply for an internship for the coming summer. I would sincerely enjoy the possibility of working for several weeks with (nom de l’organisation) in particular in the fields of (domaines d'activités de l'organisation) *** or ***. I am indeed very interested in the international stakes which these fields represent, and I would like to benefit from the challenge and the undeniable experience I would gain while working in your organization.
As you can see on the enclosed resume, I am a graduate of the University of the *** in Paris, with a DEA (Master) in international law. I am currently enrolled in a Master program of public international law at the University of Montreal, where I take courses such as law and minorities and sovereignty and globalization, in which I work more precisely on the cultural diversity. I have a full understanding of both private and public international law, though my skills are not limited to that field. Indeed, through my various professional experiences, I have acquired a great capacity of involvement and organization , and also a lot of adaptability. I have also had the opportunity to work outside of France, particularly in Turkey, the United States, and Peru, very often as part of a team. These experiences have made me more flexible and board-minded, and have provided me with a very good sense of initiative.
I am ready to invest fully and I am not afraid to confront problems or to take on new challenges. I see both as opportunities to gain even more experience and skills. I know that I will offer you, in addition to my abilities, my enthusiasm and my positive thinking, and that I will be able to make a meaningful contribution to ***.
If possible, I would like to work during the 8 weeks from June 5 to July 28. However, I remain open to the possibility of other dates if these dates are not convenient.
Please contact me for any other information that you might need regarding my application,
Thanking you for your attention,
Sincerely,
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Modifié par bridg le 22-03-2006 20:00
Divers
Réponse: Lettre en anglais: (correction) de jean31, postée le 22-03-2006 à 21:48:31 (S | E)
Bonsoir sarah,
Quelques babioles à signaler :
... for the coming Summer (majuscule) ...
... in a Master'S program ...
... to work outside (0) France ...
... more flexible and bROAd-minded... (faute de frappe)
Thank you (je préfère) for your attention.
YOURS sincerely, (me paraît plus correct)
I hope this helps and wish you all the very best in Canada.
INDISPENSABLES : 