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 Comme2 millions de personnes, recevez gratuitement chaque semaine une leçon d'anglais... Cliquez ici! Recommandés: -Jeux gratuits -Traducteur anglais -Nos autres sites | Correction/ introductionCours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En basCorrection/ introduction Message de sysyvb posté le 01-02-2013 à 20:28:23 (S | E | F) Bonsoir, j'ai fait une petite introduction, mais j'aimerais que vous me corrigiez les fautes s'il vous plait. Merci pour vos réponses. - Bonjour à tous, aujourd’hui Ange et moi avons décidé de faire un exposé sur le foot et plus précisément on souhaite parler de l’argent dans le milieu du foot. - Cela peut paraitre un peu surprenant que 2 filles parlent de foot mais on aime beaucoup ce sport et nous avons trouvé deux sujets qui sont d’actualité. - Ainsi, notre présentation se compose en 2 parties : • Tout d’abord, dans la première partie Ange vous parlera des salaires des joueurs de foot et du cas de David Beckham • Puis, dans une seconde partie, je parlerai des soupçons de corruptions qui pèsent sur l’attribution de la Coupe du Monde 2022 au Qatar. - Avant que Ange commence la première partie, voici le vocabulaire - Good morning everybody, today Ange and me, we decided to make a presentation about football and more specifically we want to talk about money in the domain of football - This may seem surprising that two girls talk about football but we love this sport and we found two recent articles - So, our presentation consists of two parts: • In the first part, Ange will tell you about the salaries of football players and the case of David Beckham • Then, in a second part, I will talk about the suspicions of corruptions concerning the World Cup in 2022 in Qatar. - But before that Ange begins the first part, this is the vocabulary ------------------- Modifié par lucile83 le 01-02-2013 20:57 Réponse: Correction/ introduction de lucile83, postée le 02-02-2013 à 18:24:30 (S | E) Hello, Les fautes sont en bleu; ce qui est barré est inutile. - Good morning everybody, today Ange and me, we decided to make a presentation about football and more specifically we want to talk about money in the domain of football - This may seem surprising that two girls talk about football but we love this sport and we found two recent articles - So, our presentation consists of two parts: • In the first part, Ange will tell you about the salaries of football players and the case of David Beckham • Then, in a second part, I will talk about the suspicions of corruptions concerning the World Cup in 2022 in Qatar. - But before Réponse: Correction/ introduction de sysyvb, postée le 02-02-2013 à 20:32:45 (S | E) Merci pour vos corrections, je viens de faire quelques modifications, mais il y a une faute que je n'arrive pas à corriger (en vert) - Good morning everybody, today Ange and me decided to make a presentation about football and more specifically we wish to talk about money in the domain of football - This may seem surprising that two girls talk about football but we love this sport and we found two recent articles - So, our presentation consists of two parts: • In the first part, Ange will tell you about the salaries of football players and the case of David Beckham • Then, in the second part, I will talk about the suspicions of corruptions concerning the World Cup in 2022 in Qatar. - But before, Ange begins the first part, here is the vocabulary. Réponse: Correction/ introduction de lucile83, postée le 02-02-2013 à 20:57:03 (S | E) Hello, - Good morning everybody, today Ange and me decided to make a presentation about football and more specifically we wish...temps du verbe to talk about money in the domain of football - This may seem surprising that two girls talk about football but we love this sport and we found two recent articles - So, our presentation consists of two parts: • In the first part, Ange will tell you about the salaries of football players and the case of...cas possessif David Beckham • Then, in the second part, I will talk about the suspicions of corruptions concerning the World Cup in 2022 in Qatar. - But before, Ange begins the first part, here is the vocabulary. This may seem surprising that two girls talk about football ...ça sent le français; je dirais plutôt: You may be surprised that ... Talking about football may sound surprising when it comes from girls .... Le reste est bon.Nice work! Réponse: Correction/ introduction de sysyvb, postée le 03-02-2013 à 11:58:14 (S | E) Très bien, merci beaucoup !! Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais |
